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Smoothies for Better Homes and Gardens
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product information:
| Attribute | Value | ||||
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| publisher | Better Homes and Gardens (January 27, 2023) | ||||
| language | English | ||||
| paperback | 96 pages | ||||
| isbn_10 | 1547862459 | ||||
| isbn_13 | 978-1547862450 | ||||
| item_weight | 9.6 ounces | ||||
| dimensions | 8 x 0.23 x 10.88 inches | ||||
| best_sellers_rank | #242,880 in Books (See Top 100 in Books) #196 in Juices & Smoothies (Books) #1,263 in Nutrition (Books) #1,277 in Kitchen Appliance Cooking | ||||
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